One page pitch
Title
I am undecided on a title at this current stage
Tag-line
Nobody can escape their past
Audience
16+ as it will involve violence
Genre
crime/thriller
Plot
3 men heist a department store and get away with the money, 2 of them cut the other one out so he hunts them down and kills them off and leaves with all the money
Location
Set a room up In school to look like a department store as I cannot actually rob a store as this would be illegal


This was my original pitch for my film however we established during the pitch that it would be hard to pull this plot off with the young cast that I have and we have tweaked the plot to make it suit the younger actors

the new plot changes so that it is 3 teens of around 18 rob a smaller shop because they cant get jobs and have no money, however one of the lads falls out with the others over the robbery they commit and is then cut out of the deal and gets no money, he then takes things into his own hands and kills the others and takes all the money.